my result for my writing test

Today Room 3 literacy class, got given their result for their writing test. But first they read our writing to make sure, I have clear ideas. How I use clear words, and how I use punctuation to make my writing interesting. How I make Sentence. We checked what mark we got, and how I improve my writing. My result for Ideas was 4, For my structure I got a 4, my Organisation I got a 3. So for my Organisation I think I should Attempt to organise my writing but not controlled enough. For my Vocabulary I got a 4, My sentence I have also got a 4 and also my Punctuation, but for my Spelling I have got given a 5. So that was what I got for my result for my writing. 

Place value 2

Room 2 maths class was given the task to complete this place value. We had to rewrite them into numbers and also in words. So me and my group, kina had completed this task.

Whale child, Serious game

Room 3 (Taranaki), had to complete this task by answering the questions and also comparing the two book we have read and explain to yous about what the differences are and what I think is similar to the two books. So this is what I had did, I have gave you guys what we the Taranaki group has did.

Samples

Hi my name is Samoa and I will explaining to you what is a special place to me and to the community. What is a special place to your community? Well, School is one the things that is really special to me and also to the community's as well. School is really important to kids because, kids like us could learn new things and it is special to us because we also make new friends, but most importantly to have heaps of fun. I will also be explaining to you how does it make it special to me and to my family.

I think you are wondering why school is special to me as well. Well I will tell you why school to super special to me. I really enjoy school especially when I get to learn new things everyday. Which is pretty awesome. It also special to me, my family and the community, because it helps kids to learn things that they didn’t even know, that would be me sometimes. I really think school is special to the community and to the kids why, because kids like us need to be good people and it keep us smart. School is special to me, especially when I get bored at home. But the most fun part about school is that we get to make new friends.

One of the things that school is special to me, is because not only do we just have fun but we also get to meet new friends and visitors. The most important thing to me about school is that it helps me to keep focus while so that I don’t get into trouble. But one of my favourite subject is Maths because we learn things like, fractions. When I first learnt about fraction I didn’t even know that word meant. Division was also the same as fraction for me, I didn’t know what it meant and you could do it until I never gave up. Multiplication were one of my favourite things because I thought it would be easy when I first started but as I really got into time tables I started to like maths. So maths is one of the things that are special to me as well. But maths keeps me focus and not distracted by my friends and to the people next to me.

This is what my mother always says to me when I get back from school “Do you have any homework”. So that when I know that school is special my mum and to my family. Next I would always come back from school and do my homework, so I could make my family happy, because it is so important to them that we are good but also smart while we are at school. That probably happens when you get from school and your mum or your family asks you if you have homework. So that is why school is special to me and to my family. These are the things that are very special to me.

Furthermore I have just explain to you what is special to me. And that was school. I really hope that this is one of the things that are special to you too. I have just talked about why school is important to me and to my family. I have also talking about why it is so special to me and what are my favourite subjects are. And why I have picked school to be my special places. So what a places that are special to you and to your community and also family.

Who is your role model?

Hang on a minute don’t scroll down yet. As you can see from my title, I will be explaining to yous about who my role model is, and why I have picked that person to be my role model. I will also be talking to you about why that person is so important to me, I will be talking to yous about why this person had care for me. I will be explaining to yous about how they could care and love me for who I am. And what that person has told me to do, which is to Respect others and care of others.

My role model is my mum, because throughout the life she has taught me to care about other people, she has looked after me my whole life. Whenever their is a special event happening for me or if I am in it, she will take her time off work and drop me off their. That makes me think that she cares about me, but she also loves me. So what I do I always make her a cup of tea, but not only that I also clean the house. The reason why I have picked my mum is because she has raised me to love other people, and to respect other people by always saying nice things to people, along with that she has taught me to always look after other people. She has always told me to always look after grandparents when she is at work, or while she is busy.

She has also taught me to always do my home work when I am at home. By giving me space to to focus, because she wants to be smart and also be a brave girl. But the most important thing she wants me to achieve is to be a smart girl and also being a netball player. So that is what I am going to try to achieve. My mum is caring, thoughtful, she is a loving person, by looking after her parents and also having to feed all of us. So that means she is showing us how she loves her whole family.

The most important reason I have picked my mum as my role model, is because she is a loving person, she cares about me and my family. And also the thing that is so special about my mum is that she is a hard worker, but not only that she is a intelligent women. She is a wonderful lady.

So what I have just talked about was how my mother is a wonderful lady. And how she is an amazing lady. So who is your role model?

poly Delicious

Have you participated in Polyfest? If you haven’t, then you may like to join polyfest next year. I will be talking to you about why belonging to polyfest is so important. And why your culture is so important to families and friends, So that is what I will be talking to you about. I am also going to be explaining to you what we did yesterday and why we had to go polyfest. I will be chatting to you about what was my favorite highlight on that day, and what was my favorite performances on that day. But not only that, I will be writing about how much fun I had at the ASB polyfest for 2017.

Yesterday team 5 went on a fun trip to the ASB polyfest, We had so much fun. We didn’t go their to just have fun, we also went their to learn about what was the important for cultures and families to see their kids performing and how they are proud to be a Tongan, or a Samoan and all of cultures. The groups that had performed yesterday, were Diversity and Maori. We had to get spilt into groups, my group was with Mrs Tele’a. Did you know that we had a wonderful women, whose birthday was yesterday, and it was Mrs Tele’a. My first highlight of the polyfest was getting to know how student’s who performs, be stable while they are performing. And how students can know more about their cultures and how it is important to their family.

My second highlight was watching the maori stages and how they go straight to their hakas, then smiling and doing their action songs. My favorite performances from the maori stage was the kaipara college. The reason why Kaipara college was my favorite performance was because, they are really focused with where their actions are, and how they can move together as a group. And their voices were terrific. I was so speechless, with how they can control themselves and how they can remember their actions. That makes me wonder if they would ever get sick of it, because how they make a mistake and then do it over and over again. Maybe one day I would like to be that.

My lucky last highlight was having fun with my friends and with team 5. It was so fun walking around the polyfest, and seeing performances that look amazing. My favorite part was going to the pacific proud because they are talking to us about how you could show respect to other people and about faith and love, and my favorite one was the language. Because it was telling us about how you are proud to be a islander. And how you could respect it.

I also enjoyed the delicious food that Mrs tele’a has brought for us. So what I have just explained to yous was about why it is so important to families and student to perform and to know more about their culture. In many ways. And what was my three highlight at the ASB polyfest for 2017. So here is a question to you. Would you take this opportunity to join the Polyfest for 2018!

Easy as child's play.

We have got given a task to complete this, and the books were about Easy as child's play and also Charlie and Maria. And we had to answer the question that was on the books. But not only that we had to create our own play pumps, create a comic strip which you would see and also compare the two books on the diagram. And we have to see if the book are similar, but we also talk about what the books are about. the books are also about water and how kids would go and fill water up with a bucket every single day.

Decimals

We are learning to Read and write decimals. Room 2 Maths Kina group was given a task to complete this presentation. We were learning about the place values and how to tell the digits. We also had to fill in the Place value chart. Then we had to write numbers but in words. Next had to turn it around which had to write the letters into numbers. We hope you enjoy. Please feel free to leave a comment.

Visual Mihi

My Visual Mihi

On the top left corner Shows how proud I am to be a Tongan. The photo on the top right corner show how I love my family very much, and on top of family shows how I really love to play music and sing songs. In the bottom left, shows how much I really like to play sports as well. Last but not least, on the bottom right shows that I go to church, and believe in Jesus Christ. 

Water Worries

This week we have been given the task to complete this presentation, about water worries. But first we had to read the story before completing the presentation. This will give you the answer of why water is so important. I really hope you have enjoyed this.

Fun Weekend

Hang on a minute don’t scroll down yet. Isn’t Weekends the best, because you get to spend time with family and friend. If you’re feeling like you would like to read more well then come along and read more about having a fun  weekend. then I will be explaining what a fun weekend you could do, if you feel like you're not having a good weekend. Well wait until I explain to you 3 different places you would like to go.

Have you been to Rainbows Ends before? Well I will be explaining to you how and why Rainbows Ends is Awesome! Rainbows Ends is a theme park. It has heaps and fun activities. Rainbows Ends  is one of my favourite event to go to. I recently just went to Rainbow Ends, and guess what it was super fun it had some scary rides but at the same time it was enjoyable. One of my favourite rides are, the Stratosfear. If you are wondering what that is, It is one of the scary rides. You get to have are option, One It is just going left and right. But the extreme one is when it spins you around and then is sometimes hangs you upside down. It very cool if you go at night time, because you could the beautiful views.

Do you know what is also a fun weekend, Going to the beach. Hmm beach, is one of the perfect time to go to the beach when it is summer or when you feel like you you just want to go for a swim. Why else do you think going to the beach is awesome? Well I will be explaining to you why is going to the beach is cool and why it is so relaxing. One of the reason’s I like to hang out at the beach is because me and my family come together, and we get to spend time with each other. And the most important thing we go to the beach is to have fun.

And the last fun weekend you could do, well is hanging out with friend’s and families. Why not? Hanging with friend’s and families are cool. Because you can go out with your friend’s and families to eat or also to play bowling or just go shopping. You could go with your friends to the movies, and you could go with your families to a special occasion to celebrate someone's birthday. Why is it fun to hang out with your friends and family’s? Because you could talk about things like what are you going to give me for my birthday, or maybe talk about school work. What could you do on the weekend’s?

So here I have talked about some of the fun weekend’s you could do while you are bored, or just sitting down and doing nothing. I have also talked you’s about 3 fun thing you could do in the weekends with your friend’s and family's or without you friends and family's. I have just talk to you about Rainbows End's, Going to the beach and also Hanging out with your friend’s and families.