Monday, 19 September 2016

My Narrative Writing

As she woke up, feeling excited about going camping with his friends like Paige and Ana and the rest of her friends, Even her best friend Sabrina. Until the next day when Emma and her friends went to Lake Tahoe. As her dashed to his parent saying goodbye, then Sprinting to Sabrina, with her bags ready to go to Lake Tahoe. As her had a long drive with all his friends, feeling tired but also super pumped at the same time. As they all sing the wheels on the bus, they start to get tired because they didn’t know that it wasn’t going to be that long. It was almost afternoon but they finally got to Lake Tahoe. They got to choose who they could sleep with so Paige and Ana went together and then Emma and Sabrina went together.

They all got their papers to see what they are going to do first Paige, Ana, Sabrina and Emma was in a group and their first activity was the Kayaking, then Paige, Ana and Sabrina was so excited because that was their favourite thing to do. But Emma didn’t like kayaking because she didn’t know what to do and how to kayak. So they got ready to kayak, and got their clothes ready and their water bottle and swimming togs. As they walked out to the kayaks, Emma said to Sabrina “ I don’t know how to kayak”. And Sabrina respond back to Sabrina and said “ it Alright because I could help you”. So Emma just had a go and she was panicking, but then as she got it, she started to get it and liked it, and so Paige, Ana and Sabrina went left, but Emma went right and didn’t know where she was going.

Furthermore she thought that her friends were following her but, as she slightly turned her body around no one was at the back of her. So she was so scared because she didn’t know where to go. As she tried to turn around she didn’t know that their was a tree that was cut. So as she made her turned she had got stucked because of the tree. So she was screaming and screaming as loud as she could. But luckily Sabrina came looking for Emma, and she found her from a long distance. Sabrina Replied “ Emma where are you”. She Responded and said “SABRINA, SABRINA i’m over here”. So Sabrina Dashed forward and saw her. And Sabrina was a hero and saw Emma and found her.

So they both were relieved that they found each other, and that Sabrina found Emma. So Emma said to Sabrina “ Thank you so much”. As they both were walking back to their tents, and still didn’t want to go back because they didn’t want to ruin the trip. So they skipped Kayaking and did something else like climbing to the mountain. And they had got a full water bottle and was so ready to walk to the top of the mountain. So then it was almost midnight and ran back to the tents ready for the next day. So they went back home the next day, and Emma went to a course about how to kayak better.

We have been Practising on how to write a Narrative writing about Kayaking. So we had plan our own Narrative about kayaking, and I have written a writing about a girl named Emma who doesn't like to Kayak but she gets trapped by a tree. Hope you enjoy my writing.

Thursday, 8 September 2016

The Boy who Learned to Fly

Usain Bolt was late again! He was always later for school, and was always in trouble too! Good thing he was speedily fast - he could even make it to school on time, but only if he really sprinted to school. Bolt Dashing through houses, heard a bark from a short distance, turning around with a slightly scary shock. Bolt rushing to get to class, Coach looking at his papers, well Usain Sprinted and messed his papers and all his papers messed up. Luckily he made it in time for class.

He didn’t even know he had no lunch, feeling so hungry that he looked at his classmate and saw them having fun with their healthy delicious lunch. Coach ready to munch his food, but as he looked forward to Bolt. As Coach sat down asking him if he wanted his food then he would have to race the fastest kid in school. The look on his face looked scared and nervous that he might lose, and was also taller than bolt. As he blowed the whistle, but the fastest kid was leading in front, but as coach slowly opened the bowl and Bolt went dashing to the tree and won the race against the fastest kid. With an excitement on his face made the coach happy, but then Coach said to the Bolt” maybe you should take this more serious. That was when he knew that he was that fast.

Furthermore he grew and grew and grew and started to become an athlete, and was competing with other athletes and was dashing through people and became a champion. As he knew he was winning so much trophies and medals he was so nervous for his other race because he didn’t know if he could do it or not. But as his mother came in (Jennifer Bolt), and saw Usain Bolt sad and nervous, she came in and told Bolt. That whatever happens you never give up and try your best. He was also scared that he won’t win the race, that even his shoes were not on the right pair, his legs were shaking and was nervous. As his mum made him happy he got up and was walking competitive, ready to run.

As the man was ready to say it, Usain Bolt looked left then right and smiled, the man said “Ready, Set Go. So all the athletes were running and Bolt looked around and saw his mother, then he wanted to make his country and his mum happy, so he dashed to the finished line, and came first again.

WALT: We have been learning about what made Usain Bolt become the fastest person in the world and what made him be the fastest, and who inspired him to run and come 1st in the Olympics. And winning the medals, Trophies and started to get sponsored by Gatorade.

Saturday, 3 September 2016

Advice Column

WALT. We have been learning about Athletes and what they do in the morning, we have also been learning about how to give advice to athletes and I had been given a task to give advice to Chris Yoddle because he needs information about money issues. And he also works part time, so I have gave him advice on what to do, and I told Chris that he should make a schedule on what he needs to do and what time does he have to train and when he needs to work and also when to eat his breakfast and what time he needs to go to bed, then get up and get ready to train the Olympics.