My Avengers Assemble

Pow! Boom! In 2 years…. Time will run out. There was a evil villain named Loki, He lived in the United Kingdom. He was a bad evil villain he wished he could take over the world. So had an idea that will make him take over the world. Loki had a brother and his name was Thor. Thor was way different to Loki so Thor was way different person compared to Loki. See you know Thor is a good person and Loki is a evil person. (which you should already know)

Furthermore Loki and Thor were getting ready to go to bed. Once they were sleeping the lightning struck and gave them powers so they both were strong and they both got an ability to be invisible. As they got struck by lightning their heart was pounding super fast as the lightning struck them. As Thor woke up he felt so shiftless it felt like he was going to faint. Moreover Thor felt furious he wanted to fight with his own brother Loki so he got his weapons ready to go. So he went to Loki’s house. As he got there he was creeping through his house trying to look for loki.

As Loki was having his sleep he went to the kitchen to make a poison drink for Loki to drink. He woke his brother up. he said his brother woke up and saw him and the drink he held. “Oh brother thanks for the drink” he slowly drank it and immediately fell to the ground. Thor now was known as a murder,the only murder in the Avengers team. The mystery of Loki still goes on but Thor would never tell anybody

To be continued…

Walt: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

Mountain narrative

Once upon a time on a Saturday in 1982 at 3pm in the afternoon, Mount Pihanga, Mount Taranaki and Mount Everest were fighting in Panmure. The people were arguing over a Mountain called Maungarei in Mount wellington in Auckland.

Mount Taranaki is the oldest, but he doesn’t get into trouble. Mount Taranaki meets Mount Pihanga in Hamilton. One month later, Mount Pihanga heard that she was going to be a mother soon. Once she told Mount Taranaki, Mount Taranaki was so happy. Her stomach was getting bigger and bigger. They had really nice neighbours living across their house.  A few hours later a new born baby boy was born, her name was Everest.

But the problem was Taranaki and Pihanga love her very much. One year later Everest grew up to be a handsome boy. then Mount taranaki and Mount pihanga was growing as well. a few hours later mount Everest wanted to play outside, so he asked Mount Taranaki and Mount Pihanga, and they both said yes. Then Everest said can we all play outside, then they replied back to  Everest “Sure why not”. So then they all went outside to play. it was getting Darker and Darker. So then Mount Taranaki said we should go back inside, so then they said alright. They went back inside and Everest felt tired, so he went to sleep.

9 years later mount Taranaki and Mount Pihanga Started to get furious with each other. But they still loved their handsome boy. But they didn’t know what to do about it. So they battled over Everest to win her beloved heart. once he knew what his parent was going to do, he sad. So then she tried to fix it. and she had an a idea. And it worked. So then they lived happily ever after.