Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Behind the door

“Jackie hurry up you are almost late for school”. Jackie woke up his brother Henry, telling him to hurry and get ready for school. Jackie and Henry dashed to their uniforms getting dressed. As they both were running to school, they stopped and saw a scary house, but they both were too scared to check it out. So Jackie said to Henry “ Shall he check it out straight after school”. Henry responded back to Jackie “ Okay”.

Furthermore It was time for morning tea, they both were sitting together and started eating their morning tea. Jackie’s next class was english, and Henry’s next class was science. Henry loved science so he was super pumped about science. But on the other hand Jackie is not really good at english so that pumped about english, It was almost time for lunch. So they both planned to meet at Jackie’s locker and then will get ready to check the scary and haunted house. So henry had a torch in his bag, opened his bag up and got the torch out of his bag. Jackie slightly opened the door and went inside first.

Moreover Henry was too scared to go inside he knew that this house was haunted, but Jackie didn’t know it was haunted. Henry told Jackie that this house was haunted but Jackie didn’t believe him. And said “ I don’t believe you”. Suddenly they were both locked inside the house. And henry said “ Now do you believe me”. And so they both look at each other and screamed for help. It was nearly midnight and they were both still stucked in the haunted house. Jackie and Henry’s parents were worried about them because school was already over but they haven’t came home yet. So their mum called the cops and asked them if they could find my two kids Henry and Jackie.

Jackie and Henry’s big sister was walking outside, as she was walking outside she could hear Jackie’s voice from a long distance.As she saw the haunted house, that was when she knew where they were. And dashed to the haunted house. As she got there she didn’t know what to do, so she kicked the window and Jackie and Henry was now safe, thanks to their sister. So they ran back home and told their mum and dad to call the cops again and tell them that they are okay now.  

And so they never went back to the haunted house again, and they have to get dropped off and picked up from school everyday. And so nothing happened to them ever since the accident.

Image Attribution. By Dennis Brown (Own work) [GFDL ( or CC BY-SA 3.0 (], via Wikimedia Commons

1 comment:

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