Tuesday, 26 April 2016

Narrative writing

Once upon a time on a Saturday in 1982 at 3pm in the afternoon, Mount Pihanga, Mount Taranaki and Mount Everest were fighting in Panmure. The people were arguing over a Mountain called Maungarei in Mount wellington in Auckland.

Mount Taranaki is the oldest, but he doesn’t get into trouble. Mount Taranaki meets Mount Pihanga in Hamilton. One month later, Mount Pihanga heard that she was going to be a mother soon. Once she told Mount Taranaki, Mount Taranaki was so happy. Her stomach was getting bigger and bigger. They had really nice neighbours living across their house.  A few hours later a new born baby boy was born, her name was Everest.

But the problem was Taranaki and Pihanga love her very much. One year later Everest grew up to be a handsome boy. then Mount taranaki and Mount pihanga was growing as well. a few hours later mount Everest wanted to play outside, so he asked Mount Taranaki and Mount Pihanga, and they both said yes. Then Everest said can we all play outside, then they replied back to  Everest “Sure why not”. So then they all went outside to play. it was getting Darker and Darker. So then Mount Taranaki said we should go back inside, so then they said alright. They went back inside and Everest felt tired, so he went to sleep.

9 years later mount Taranaki and Mount Pihanga Started to get furious with each other. But they still loved their handsome boy. But they didn’t know what to do about it. So they battled over Everest to win her beloved heart. once he knew what his parent was going to do, he sad. So then she tried to fix it. and she had an a idea. And it worked. So then they lived happily ever after.





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