Thursday, 7 August 2014

This is my Commonwealth writing

The commonwealth games are a sporting event between 71 countries around the world. They are similar to the Olympics because they play all sort of sport. They have an opening and a closing ceremony and there was a man that was holding an torch that lit up. There are 17 sports in the commonwealth games. There are 10 cores the cores mean that they play every game and they select 7 people to choose 7 sport like judo, shooting, shot put, netball, rugby, running, hockey. In July 2014 it is held in Scotland and in 2015 it is going to held in Samoa.

Valerie Adams did a tremendous hurl to win the gold medal. Valerie Adams had the world record for the shot put and she won all the gold medal for New Zealand. Usain Bolt is a tremendous runner. Usain Bolt won all the gold medal for Jamaica.  


1 comment:

  1. Lots of information here Samoa. I like your sentence where you said that Valerie hurled the shot put. Great word!
    Make sure to double check your information before posting on your blog - are you sure that the next Commonwealth Games will be help next year???