Feeling the rocky ground
Seeing kids running around
Having the time of their lives
Giving away high fives
Kicking the ball up in the air
Having fun,
Like I just don’t care
Feeling a little scared
As I am not prepared
As I am not prepared
Malo e lelei samoa, I love the poem you have writen, it is a creative poem. I like the part where you say "Kicking the ball up in the air Having fun, Like I just don’t care", it shows your having fun and you don't care of what people think. I hope you write more poems just like this and I can't wait to read it. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Samoa,
ReplyDeleteI am really impressed on your Poem. I can see that your poem has a lot of meaning in it. I really think that your title (Creative Writing) really expresses what your Poem is like. I hope to see more spectacular poems like this. Keep up the great work!!
From Ana,
Malo e lelei Samoa, your poem is so amazing. My favourite saying in your poem is “Having fun, like I just don’t care”. That shows that you really like having fun. By reading your poem you sound like you are a outgoing girl and that you must blend in with everybody. Hope to see more spectacular poems like this.
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Samoa,
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem how it's describing the school, my favourite part was how you feel when your feet hit the rocky ground. Good job keep it up.
Malo e Lelei Samoa
ReplyDeletei've just finished reading your amazing Poem. It was great what my favourite part on your amazing Poem is how it was Rhymed. It did sound right and it was perfect poem and i just want to say love your work and keep up the good work!! From Lini
I wonder why your name is Samoa but your from Tonga???
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