Monday 27 June 2016
Thursday 23 June 2016
Tongan warrior - Narrative/story
A long long time ago in Tonga, there was newborn baby who grew to become a strong young warrior. He had been raised by his parents. His father decided to name him Sione after himself. He lived in a beautiful village named Nuku’alofa. Before Sione's father died, he had made him a powerful weapon.
As Sione grew, the leader from the other side decided to kill Sione so that he could get the powerful weapon that Sione’s dad made. Sione knew that enemies wanted him gone. So Sione practiced and practiced every day, so that he would be prepared for battle.
As years went by Sione became a strong leader. But the day soon came when Sione knew he was in danger. The enemy wanted to fight his village for his weapon. The leader from the other side shouted "where is Sione?" So he bravely came outside and said “I am Sione”.
Next Sione grabbed his weapon and began to fight. As they were both fighting Sione felt furious, so then he knifed him the the middle of his stomach and so then all the enemy ran away because they felt terrified.
Finally, Sione looked up the sky and said “Thank you, Thank you for helping me!" The village was now safe and peaceful. Sione was a hero.
As Sione grew, the leader from the other side decided to kill Sione so that he could get the powerful weapon that Sione’s dad made. Sione knew that enemies wanted him gone. So Sione practiced and practiced every day, so that he would be prepared for battle.
As years went by Sione became a strong leader. But the day soon came when Sione knew he was in danger. The enemy wanted to fight his village for his weapon. The leader from the other side shouted "where is Sione?" So he bravely came outside and said “I am Sione”.
Next Sione grabbed his weapon and began to fight. As they were both fighting Sione felt furious, so then he knifed him the the middle of his stomach and so then all the enemy ran away because they felt terrified.
Finally, Sione looked up the sky and said “Thank you, Thank you for helping me!" The village was now safe and peaceful. Sione was a hero.
As you can see in Extension the Yr 5&6 had created a warrior artwork and i also created a narrative that goes with my warrior.
Tongan Warrior Narrative - Final
A long long time ago in Tonga, there was newborn baby who grew to become a strong young warrior. He had been raised by his parents. His father decided to name him Sione after himself. He lived in a beautiful village named Nuku’alofa. Before Sione's father died, he had made him a powerful weapon.
As Sione grew, the leader from the other side decided to kill Sione so that he could get the powerful weapon that Sione’s dad made. Sione knew that enemies wanted him gone. So Sione practiced and practiced every day, so that he would be prepared for battle.
As years went by Sione became a strong leader. But the day soon came when Sione knew he was in danger. The enemy wanted to fight his village for his weapon. The leader from the other side shouted "where is Sione?" So he bravely came outside and said “I am Sione”.
Next Sione grabbed his weapon and began to fight. As they were both fighting Sione felt furious, so then he knifed him the the middle of his stomach and so then all the enemy ran away because they felt terrified.
Finally, Sione looked up the sky and said to his father “Thank you, Thank you for helping me!" The village was now safe and peaceful. Sione was a hero.
As Sione grew, the leader from the other side decided to kill Sione so that he could get the powerful weapon that Sione’s dad made. Sione knew that enemies wanted him gone. So Sione practiced and practiced every day, so that he would be prepared for battle.
As years went by Sione became a strong leader. But the day soon came when Sione knew he was in danger. The enemy wanted to fight his village for his weapon. The leader from the other side shouted "where is Sione?" So he bravely came outside and said “I am Sione”.
Next Sione grabbed his weapon and began to fight. As they were both fighting Sione felt furious, so then he knifed him the the middle of his stomach and so then all the enemy ran away because they felt terrified.
Finally, Sione looked up the sky and said to his father “Thank you, Thank you for helping me!" The village was now safe and peaceful. Sione was a hero.
Monday 20 June 2016
My tongan warrior narrative
A long long time ago in 1544, there was newborn baby who grew to become a strong young warrior. He had been raised by his Parents. His dad decided to name him Sione. He was named after his dad. He lives in a beautiful village named Nuku’alofa. Before His dad went he made him a powerful weapon that was made for him Sione. As Sione started to grow and grow and became a tennager the leader from the other side wanted him gone so that he could get the powerful weapon that Sione’s dad made. Sione knew that the other side wanted him gone. Sione’s dad went away for a few weeks until he went and never came back.
So Sione practiced and practiced every day, so that when the enemy came he would be prepared for the dangerous battle. As years went on Sione soon turned 19 years old and sadly his dad passed away. So Sione prayed every single day that is dad will guide him as he will be facing the other crew.Sione tried to stay strong, because his father won’t be with him. But also the hardest thing for Sione was trying to stand strong without his dad. As Sione went to sleep he will always dream about his dad every single night. Because that is how he could be strong.
As sione was the leader he thought that he will need to take over his dad’s job for good. But there was another thing that he was wondering was why his father left him and why he couldn't come back. It was almost midnight and the moon was slowly coming up. That was when Sione knew that he will need to pray. After he prayed Suddenly he was pounding fast as. As he went for a drink he could hear a strange noise coming through a short distance. That was when Sione knew he was in danger. As it was coming closer and closer he was hiding his powerful weapon. And that was when he knew that he was in deep danger. So then he called his group and they gathered around him to know what they are doing. And also as he creepily went outside he could hear kids screaming. As the leader from the other side shouted and said “ i am looking for a boy named Sione. And that was when Sione knew that, he was the one that wanted him gone.
So he bravely came outside and said “yes this is me”. And as the leader from the other side turned around he clapped it hand and replied and said “Well done you are just like your father. As he said “you are just like you father, Sione felt Furious. So then he told his crew to come and then the other crew came too. And so they had begun their match. As they were versing each other Sione and the other leader went face to face with each other. And Sione felt furious but also nervous at the same time. So he got his powerful weapon ready to go at the back of his back. And the enemy got his weapon ready to go. As they had begun their match, Sione’s group had beaten the other crew and the other crew had got defeated.
And so Sione looked up the sky and said “Thank you, Thank you for guiding me as i was battling against the enemy. And as they all were safe, Sione and his crew celebrated because they had saved their village and now there village is now safe and peaceful. But as he was growing he became a hero and he will always remember what he had done to make his dad happy.
So Sione practiced and practiced every day, so that when the enemy came he would be prepared for the dangerous battle. As years went on Sione soon turned 19 years old and sadly his dad passed away. So Sione prayed every single day that is dad will guide him as he will be facing the other crew.Sione tried to stay strong, because his father won’t be with him. But also the hardest thing for Sione was trying to stand strong without his dad. As Sione went to sleep he will always dream about his dad every single night. Because that is how he could be strong.
As sione was the leader he thought that he will need to take over his dad’s job for good. But there was another thing that he was wondering was why his father left him and why he couldn't come back. It was almost midnight and the moon was slowly coming up. That was when Sione knew that he will need to pray. After he prayed Suddenly he was pounding fast as. As he went for a drink he could hear a strange noise coming through a short distance. That was when Sione knew he was in danger. As it was coming closer and closer he was hiding his powerful weapon. And that was when he knew that he was in deep danger. So then he called his group and they gathered around him to know what they are doing. And also as he creepily went outside he could hear kids screaming. As the leader from the other side shouted and said “ i am looking for a boy named Sione. And that was when Sione knew that, he was the one that wanted him gone.
So he bravely came outside and said “yes this is me”. And as the leader from the other side turned around he clapped it hand and replied and said “Well done you are just like your father. As he said “you are just like you father, Sione felt Furious. So then he told his crew to come and then the other crew came too. And so they had begun their match. As they were versing each other Sione and the other leader went face to face with each other. And Sione felt furious but also nervous at the same time. So he got his powerful weapon ready to go at the back of his back. And the enemy got his weapon ready to go. As they had begun their match, Sione’s group had beaten the other crew and the other crew had got defeated.
And so Sione looked up the sky and said “Thank you, Thank you for guiding me as i was battling against the enemy. And as they all were safe, Sione and his crew celebrated because they had saved their village and now there village is now safe and peaceful. But as he was growing he became a hero and he will always remember what he had done to make his dad happy.
Friday 17 June 2016
My Animation about comic arts
This term team 4 has been learning about comic arts and comic books. I have created a animation showing a comet. We also had to draw a superhero, and my superhero was Super girl. Hope you enjoy my movie.
Thursday 16 June 2016
Wednesday 15 June 2016
Bok Choy
This week my group, redbands have been reading a story about Bok Choy. we had to find at least 3 words from the text which we don't understand and define it.
Real life heroes. Two girls helping out Samoa:
Kelsi and Aleisha helping Schools in Samoa
Have you ever been to Samoa? Well I haven’t, but There are two girls who had been helping schools in Samoa. There names are Kelsi and Aleisha. they are also a year 12 student at feilding high school. They had a holiday to Samoa, after they had arrived back to New Zealand they had realized that they should help Samoan Schools. So Kelsi and Aleisha got busy with their Pens and books. So I am going to tell you how they are a hero.
So Kelsi and Alisha wrote letters to all the primary school’s in felding. And so they had been collecting gears, like old computers and books like old school journey and also sports equipment. The mum was also a teacher at feilding high school, and she had access to all the books that they have not been using. And also Aleisha’s little sister was also helping them as well.
Well Aleisha said that, the reason why they are helping Samoa is because in Samoa, in schools the only thing they pay is their Teachers. So that means the books and the pencils they have they have to fundraise themselves to get more equipment. They went to office max which had plenty of spare things, like books and papers. They had spent two days on sorting things out.
Furthermore Aleisha and Kelsi didn’t know how to send it to Samoa. So they were trying to find a way to ship the stuff to Samoa. One of the air force member was really happy that Kelsi and Aleisha had put these things together for Samoa to use. And now all of the equipment has arrived to Samoa. So now they have Books, Sports gear and old computers. They also have selves to put books on. It was worth 75 thousand all because of Aleisha and Kelsi.
And now after they had finished providing equipment to Samoa, they now say that they are back to messing around. These are two smart girls who didn’t walk away from this situation. And so that was how they became a hero.
WALT: explain why someone may be considered a hero in real life.
As you can see i have wrote about 2 high school girls who had helped school's in Samoa.
Here is the link to the video: https://youtu.be/_0-vwNagcvA
Friday 10 June 2016
Tips for comic arts
This week my group which is the Red bands, have been learning about how to give tips for Comic Arts. Well we had to spilt up into 3 groups, and I was with Ajani and Richard. So Here is what we have been writing and brainstorming about.
My NZ Gold Mining
As you could see i have created a Google map and pined them. It also shows facts about this place. I have done pines from nearly all of the worlds.
Thursday 9 June 2016
My Avengers Assemble
Furthermore Loki and Thor were getting ready to go to bed. Once they were sleeping the lightning struck and gave them powers so they both were strong and they both got an ability to be invisible. As they got struck by lightning their heart was pounding super fast as the lightning struck them. As Thor woke up he felt so shiftless it felt like he was going to faint. Moreover Thor felt furious he wanted to fight with his own brother Loki so he got his weapons ready to go. So he went to Loki’s house. As he got there he was creeping through his house trying to look for loki.
As Loki was having his sleep he went to the kitchen to make a poison drink for Loki to drink. He woke his brother up. he said his brother woke up and saw him and the drink he held. “Oh brother thanks for the drink” he slowly drank it and immediately fell to the ground. Thor now was known as a murder,the only murder in the Avengers team. The mystery of Loki still goes on but Thor would never tell anybody
To be continued…Walt: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
Friday 3 June 2016
Thursday 2 June 2016
Divided in parts
WALT: this week we are trying to divided in parts. And convert proper and improper fraction.
Wednesday 1 June 2016
Harry's war
Dear Ted,
I know you're happy that the war is over but there is a problem with the boat so i am afraid that you won't be coming home for 2 weeks.
From Harry
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Will he save her
Mary Jane was working as a Lawyer, in New York City. One Beautiful sunny day she had got a call from her boss saying that she had to go to court. Then she was walking back from work. When she got home she went straight to bed. While she was sleeping she could hear a strange noise from outside her door, so she dashed to the door to check if anyone was their.
So then Mary Jane called peter, Peter is her best friend, So then mary Jane asked if he could meet her.As she turned around a evil man, called dracula Sprayed her, and then she fell down. Furthermore the evil dracula dragged mary up top the building. When peter got to mary jane’s door he knocked on the door but no one opened the door.
Peter was waiting outside the door for hour, Peter didn’t know what to do so then he just left. After all that drama mary jane left the past behind. And she wanted to carry on with her life, and also she was working so hard for 4 years she became a professional lawyer.
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